I want to do commentating - ENGLAND WIN THE WORLD CUP 2010 !!! VIDEO INSIDE

I'm going to try and give you a bit of constructive criticism :))

The best commentators imo are the ones that are witty, informative (knowledgable about the game and players involved) and have passion for the game.

I can see what you're trying to do, but it is WAAAAYYY over the top. If anybody listened to it for 90mins they would have a blinding headache. Also for you to keep that up for 90mins would be hard on your heart.

Try and be a bit more subtle, give a few facts about the people playing. Research players that you are going to commentate on and then you can add bits into it as the game comes along. You can maybe have some jokes prepared on what you have learnt and then add them throughout the game aswell.

When there are good chances then up the tempo abit and show some passion.

At the moment you are too frantic and all over the place.

Hope that helps :DD (Not claiming I am an expert, but that is what I like to see/hear in a commentator)
 
If i had a "Pass t Rooney" accent i would take elocution lessons :)
 
Our and yours are pretty much the same except yours has a twang of shittyness to it ;)
 
better than sounding half scouse half manc

clam down clam down im mad fer it
 
Managed 10 seconds.......I say no! And what's with the ball being lovely?!

But if it makes you feel any better I cn't stand commentary anyway, would prefer for them to all just shut the hell up!
 
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